Q1. So, in the end, how’d your WP2 paper go? What were you happy with? What weren’t you? Why? Be specific! (Remember: this is fodder for your end-of-quarter metacognitive reflection)
My WP2 went okay, I guess. My first draft was way better than my first draft for WP1, so revising it wasn't as horrible as last week. I felt more prepared and I overall feel like my essay was much better. It felt like I couldn't really add as much as my voice, though. There was so much information that I feel like maybe my voice was lost. Hopefully it is okay, though. Also the directions weren't very clear so I think I may have messed up super bad...
Q2. Which 2 or 3 comments that you received yesterday were the most helpful for you? Why?
The most helpful comments I received were the one regarding my thesis and the one about the econ/climate article I used. I didn't even realize that I didn't even HAVE a thesis. And the econ/climate article really helped me see how my audience would better understand my writing.
I agree that this topic did not give much room for voice or style. There was so much information to cover that you almost had to sound generic to fit it in. I also agree that it was hard to write a thesis that covered all the parts of the and still was a real thesis and I also think that I make have f**** up pretty bad.
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