You
type the word “also” into the search box on Thesaurus.com. You then furiously
scroll down and through 3 pages of synonyms, but you don’t find anything. The
mustardy yellow of the website irritates you and you finally decide to just use
the word “also.” Scratch that. You erase the whole sentence and decide to
integrate the information in a different way. You look at the time and realize
your paper is due in two hours and decide to start it all over because it just
didn’t sound “scholarly” enough. You look at the clock again and realize it has
been half an hour and you still have nothing. Finally, you decide to look up
“how to write scholarly paper” on Google. Success. The first thing to come up
is a “Step-by-Step” guide to writing a scholarly paper. There are apparently
sixteen steps to write a scholarly paper so you try it out. You finish within
in forty minutes and your paper sounds fancy as hell, but for some reason it
still sucks. Your paper sounds like a robot wrote it but it will pass through
peer reviews and maybe even fool your professor. But how does this happen? It
is all thanks to genres and conventions. Conventions are the unifying traits of
genres. Conventions can make your paper fit into a genre, but that doesn’t
necessarily mean that they will make it good or convincing.
A
website that is better than you at so-called “BSing” papers is called SCIgen.
SCIgen can turn you into the published author of a fancy gibberish research
mess with the click of a button. SCIgen papers make no sense—that is easy to
see—but how can a website possibly generate a paper that could go as far as
fooling someone? The answer is easy: genres and conventions. Through careful
use of the conventions of a research paper, SCIgen can “write” a paper that
will fit into the genre of a research paper.
In
order to find out more about the conventions of a research paper, I found an
actual research paper that studies the effects of stress on the brain. The
paper looked much like I expected. Simply accessing the paper made it feel like
a research paper. I had to go through a library database to find it, which I
was only ever required to do for AP Chemistry laboratory reports. The article appeared
similar to SCIgen. They were both aesthetically similar—they were presented in
a boring manner, on a boring website, in a “formal” font, and in a seemingly
reader-friendly format. Both SCIgen and the research article I found started
out with an informative title and a quick overview of the content of the paper.
Both also contained a conclusion, and of course, they included fancy “jargon,”
lots of names, impressive transitions, and page after page of data.
The
scholarly piece, despite its many similarities to the SCIgen article, made
SCIgen look like what it is: a whole lot of BS. The scholarly piece, unlike
SCIgen, actually had a point to make. It was filled with research and names,
but again, unlike SCIgen, the scholarly piece had data that you could actually
find on the works cited and maybe even read it if you had the time and interest.
Under the titles of both, you could find the authors, although on the stress
articles, a number linked to similar articles and author affiliations followed
each name. In that sense the actual research article appeared more trustworthy
than SCIgen. Both SCIgen and the research article were broken up into different
topics pertaining the subject, but only the scholarly piece’s organization
seemed to make sense. SCIgen appeared as more of an experimental process, while
the article on stress was neatly broken up into human and animal research as
well as some further results of the study. Furthermore, the scholarly piece
went above and beyond the expectations of a research paper. It expressed the
many aspects of stress, but in the end, the scholarly piece actually discussed
stress and the fact that it is not always a bad thing. A person evidently wrote
the scholarly piece, which is what SCIgen could not simulate. It is hard to
explain how this was evident, but one of the main separating traits of SCIgen and
the scholarly piece was that I could see and feel the effort that went into the
scholarly piece. The scholarly piece seemed almost passionate when compared to
SCIgen, which at the end of the day, seemed like someone slapped a keyboard for
two hours and the result was a bunch of autocorrected nonsense. Just because
something fits into a genre does not mean it will have the same effect as
another paper of the same genre.
http://www.nature.com/nrn/journal/v10/n6/full/nrn2639.html#a2
http://scigen.csail.mit.edu/scicache/870/scimakelatex.31533.Nat+Politron.Gaby+Flores.Tiffany+Velasquez.Grecia+Jimenez.html



I really like your writing style! I wasn’t bored when I was reading this and your intro really hooked me! Another thing I like is the pictures at the end. I might just have the brain of a 3rd grader but seeing pictures makes me more inclined to stop and actually read your blog post. However, I think your PB would be slightly easier to follow if you broke it up into more body paragraphs and added a conclusion paragraph at the end. When I was reading this I got a little lost in the middle and had to stop to determine what the main idea of the big paragraph at the end was.
ReplyDeleteThank you for your feedback! I'll try that for my PB2B. :)
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